One day Nicki and Safaree were in the studio and Nicki was recording while SB was daydreaming. He was thinking of him and Nicki getting married until Nicki Said "Faree how was that"? He jumped up and responded saying "That was great Nic. Pause" Nicki asked him "What were you thinking about SB"? He responded saying "Nothing". Nicki knew he was lying but, she just went back to recording.
When they got back home Nicki sat on SB's lap while they were watching Jersey Shore (One of Nic's favorite shows). Nicki had fell asleep in Sb's lap so he kissed her forhead and carried her to her room. He put her in bed and whispered to her "Goodnight".
That next morning SB had cooked breakfast. He made eggs, turkey bacon and biscuits. Nicki walked in while he was setting the table. "This smells great Safaree". Nicki went to sit down and SB was bringing the food to the table. "Thanks Nic". SB sat down next to Nicki.
When they finished breakfast Drake had called Nicki asking her to dinner she agreed. SB didn't like when Nicki went out with Drake. He was jealous of Drake because he thought Drake would take Nicki from him. So Nicki went to pick out her clothes she chose a black strapless dress with black 2 inch Gisseuppe heels ( aka the monster shoe). When she got to the restaurant Drake was wearing a black tuxedo with a white buttoned up shirt.
Nicki"s Outfit
Drake's Outfit
"You look great Nic". Drake told Nicki. "Thanks Drizzy. You do too". Drake chuckled. The waiter asked for their drinks Nicki ordered a water and drake got the same. Drake started off the conversatiom by asking "How is your sophmore album coming along". "Great". Nicki answered with an sleepy tone. "What's wrong Nic"? "Nothing Drizzy just a little tired. That's all. Um Drake im going home okay see you later".
When Nicki got home she went upstairs took off her clothes and put on her pajamas and noticed SB was already sleep. She walked in his room and whispered " I love you SB". She made sure when she left out his room she walked as quiet as she could so she didn't wake him.
Nicki's Pajamas
Well how was my first chapter please comment.
Aww :) This is cool. When Nic says "I Love You" 2 Safaree, does she mean in a friendly way? Or something more?
ReplyDeleteTell u wut, post the next chap and we shall find out, lol
Good job!
That was a good start off but just a little pointer when nicki went to dinner with drake and he asked her a question and she went str8 home after being there for like 2 min. It kind of messes up the flow of the story so u might want to add a little more dialogue and make the relationships believe able, relatable and creative... If tht makes any sense but like I said b4 it was a GREAT start off and I HOPE u keep writing :) and I enjoyed it !!!
ReplyDelete:O loveee it1 yess cant wait to keep reading :DDD
ReplyDeleteLMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO The way she left drake !! IM DEADINGTON! "Im leaving okay bye!" DONT MAKE ME DIEEE
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